Your DPS is very nice. I like the way in which the text is laid out and I like the fact that you decide to use a Q&A format for your text used within the DPS. Furthermore, the picture compliments the DPS and the colours used in the DPS.
However, in order to improve this I think that you should position the text in the DPS in a more central position (on the same page) and you should align the text used within the title of your DPS.
Your DPS is nice. I like the way in which the image is carried across both pages and the way the text is laid out. To improve I think you could reduce the opacity of the white abit more. You also could have placed the model into the middle of the first page.
Your DPS is very nice. I like the way in which the text is laid out and I like the fact that you decide to use a Q&A format for your text used within the DPS. Furthermore, the picture compliments the DPS and the colours used in the DPS.
ReplyDeleteHowever, in order to improve this I think that you should position the text in the DPS in a more central position (on the same page) and you should align the text used within the title of your DPS.
Your DPS is nice. I like the way in which the image is carried across both pages and the way the text is laid out. To improve I think you could reduce the opacity of the white abit more. You also could have placed the model into the middle of the first page.
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