Improvements to make for my magazine

These are the things that need to be improved with my magazine, just some minor things changed could change my grade by far. 

evaluation progress

adding a tiny bit to my plan/draft will help me to give a basis on the sort of things i have to talk about in the final evaluation.

Evaluation Technology Plan

Progress of the plan

Today during the lesson i managed to get to get up to questions 3 of my Evaluation of Technology methods, i hope by next lesson to have finished all the questions and start working on my draft which i will try and get done before the christmas holidays. 

Final Contents Page

Final Double Page Spread

Final Front Cover